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[sdelmonte]

If you RP with me at Milliways Bar, and are familiar with my pups, general_lando and gotham_knocking, in their canons, feel free to comment about what, if anything, I am doing wrong or that needs to be improved.

If you don't, this is not the post ou are looking for, move along. :)

Comments

[buongiornodaisy.livejournal.com]

OK, I have only a passing knowledge of "Star Wars" canon. I've seen all six movies and loved (most of them) to itty bitty pieces, but I haven't read the books nor played the video games nor seen any of the other side-canons. However, I love your Lando. He's great. I think you've captured his voice well, and you've done an excellent job writing a ladies' man who doesn't come off as a creep. He's genuinely charming, and he's intelligent, which makes him a success in the ladies department.

[(Anonymous)]

If I had any gripes with your pups, it would be something really minor like the spelling mistakes that just irk me once in a while cause things like that frustrate me.

Aside from that? They're love. You do a good job capturing Lando (who I think is pretty hard to capture) and I love reading them.

[sdelmonte]

For the record (in my feeble defense), I am a good speller. But I am a lousy typist, and an even wrose self-proofreader. :)